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The one thing I can think of, very small, is where it says "some of our featured clients" for now at least you should just say "look at our featured client", since there's only one. To me at least (and I don't know how normal my opinions are) the plural in the text and then only one example is discordant, and suggests incompleteness.
(I hope I don't sound completely full of shit, because it's the closest to advanced critique I could think of. That and media instead of mediums, but I think in that sentence it probably reads better as mediums, and then my inner grammar nazi yells at me for that.)
Cheers.
(I hope I don't sound completely full of shit, because it's the closest to advanced critique I could think of. That and media instead of mediums, but I think in that sentence it probably reads better as mediums, and then my inner grammar nazi yells at me for that.)
Cheers.